Sunday, December 28, 2008

To flick and pick

Please give me the smile of life
the sweetness to live and the light of life
Talk to me, if you are happy
and tell me how much I am to you.
Let me cry, as if there no one is there.
Lend me your shoulder in the middle side.
You have give me some cruelsome word
I will keep that in mind
You have give me some sadness worry.
the heart is waver so will the mind
Love come and go
like the flick of an eyes.

2 comments:

Lorita said...

Bravo again!!! Actually I have written a poem just like this before except it was about somebody giving up hope. I used the expression:
"Hope comes and flies,
But listen to that beat in the distance,
...echoing the true meaning of life"
: )

Quoc said...

nice, verse, your is even more bravo!