I can't match up to her
Her hair are so long
Like the road that she walk
A lone road that only she can walk
A road where there're a stop
That where she met me
But somehow I can't walk
On the road that she walk
A lone road that not many people walk
Now and then she would meet someone
but in the end, she is alone
I would stand here and there
Cheers for her to be near
Her goal that she make clear
To you and me
and when she reach
Her final destination
She would lay down and rest
For she will be with us forever
but her Life long work will be eternal
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That is cute
I thought the ending would be depressing like how I would end it xD
WOW!!!! THAT WAS REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY SWEET!!!! Thank you so much for writing this amazing poem. I know that life is difficult but the road I take will somehow help me. I have never read such an amazing poem before.
And Rachel, thank you very much. You want me to die in the end!?!?!? I thought you were my friend.
; ) JK
lol I just like sad ending not that you have to die.
And of course I want the best for you xD
Thanks Rachel!!! I understand but I was actually hoping for a sad ending. Thanks Quoc for not having a depressing ending for me. Usually when I write stories about myself, I think about an accident and then write it. Sad, I know but that's life!!! Hey, this sounds just like the palm reading you told me about. I will have a long life but there's going to be an accident some time in the near future.
I mean I like sad ending.
But when I write it is not about me.
I think of lyrics and then I use that as an idea xD
Okay people! Everyone have to die once or twice but this doesn't mean that it bad. As you see harpeer lee. That author wrote TKAM and that the last novel. So that author leave behind a great story and like Lorita, she will once day accomplish her goal and have good fortune!
EX. Winning lottory-share it with me^.^
Okay, okay Quoc. I will share the lottery with you!!! If that's ever going to happen. ; )
You never know Lorita, you will never know xD
Like on time I found five dollars ~tehehe
I thought that day will never come.
Man, talking about finding 5$
Last week at badminton practice on wed. I was walking with isaac and a "sign" of money caught my eye. I bend down like the wind and grap the piece of money up. Looking at it, it a 5$. Man, i was needing money too.
Why is this conversation leading to a topic that's way off topic?? However, it seems to be quite interesting.
Wait, Quoc, did you pick up the money?????
my gosh everyone thinking bad about this poem
I mean who doesn't pick up money :DDDD
and Phuong your late comments are not needed ~Lol
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