Wednesday, September 24, 2008

Knowing I can't have you is what pain me most

I got bored so I wrote this poem. Most of it is kindna true on what happen around me. >.<


Knowing you, loving you and care about you
Is what deepen my love for you, but
Not all my thought is about you.
I feel as if, I'm thinking but
It's getting no where.
I feel as if, I'm known the answer but
It's not the right one.
You say I'm worthless 
I don't know if that really
true
I know I had this feeling
but it so unrealistic.
I lost in my own thought
because of you.

Knowing you, loving you and care about you
is what causing me this problem but
what do you know when
you call me worthless 
than a piece of homework.
What was that you say,
because I'm worthless.
It heartbroken to know
to live with the true 
that I weigh nothing in your heart but 
I don't know why my heart
is still yearning for you 
and only you.
 





6 comments:

Xxx(SEAN)xxX said...

That's a very good poem/lyric.

Quoc said...

i saw lorita did it so i decide to wrote a poem myself and it basic on how i feel sometime

MissTrinh said...

Tehehe :] What a sad poem but I can't laughing.

You should write more poems :D

kim said...

hahhaha how sad n cheezie ^w^ who's is this person quoc? jk

☆☮me! ☮☆ said...

Wow thats really deep... I like the poem and I can sympathize with what your saying! And thanks so much for that great advice.. Ohh Yeah and I agree NICO IS BLIND! -/

Quoc said...

A person who is deep in my heart, whom I will never forget.