Is what deepen my love for you, but
Not all my though is about you.
I feel as if, I'm thinking but
it's getting no where.
I feel as if, I know the answer but
it's not the rite one.
You say I'm worthless
I don't know if that really true
I know I had this feeling but
it's so unrealistic.
I lost in my own though
because of you
Knowing you, loving you and care about you
is what causing me this problem but
what do you know when
you called me worthless
than a piece of homework.
What was that you say,
because I'm worthless
It heartbroken to know
to live with the true
that I weight nothing in your heart but
I don't know why my heart
still yearning for you
and only you.
Is this what people call love
why it so painful but
still so kind.
What kind of fire
that light the theme of my heart
that keep yearning for you.
What kind of feeling
that make my heart trembling
just by the sound of your name.
Your word is like a sharp knife that pierced
my heart.
Blood start to drip like rain and then
quickly pour out like a waterfall.
As each drop of blood fell
my heart start to throb and I fall unconscious.
I wish you could see
the pain that you caused to me.
How could you live with yourself
when I gave you my heart but
in return rejection is what I got.
I want to curses you for what you done but
my mouth won't utter no word.
My love bring pain but it strong
just like the love of motherhood.
How can I bring myself to love you
when my heart fill with sadness but
now my heart still yearning for you
and only you.
8 comments:
Lol. Wow, sad poem as usual :]
quoc, your poetry is incredible.
please continue to write.
love matthew
Thx, Matthew
I do like to write poetry but it not good. I need to be in that mood to write. I have wrote some other poems too but in vietnamese. I had experience many mood(feeling that most people don't know about).
This is so beautiful, quoc. It's a definite work of art. You should be proud of yourself. It's also kind of like a response to my poem too. However, I think it's amazing and out of this world.
Isn't that too much Lorita! Jk, and thx for the comment.
Thank you so much for your advice! You give such great advice... I love your poetry. Haha when you become a famous poet don't forget me! =]
It seem I do. Hehehehe! ^.^
Dang
I think you can become a poet. Those words had really got to me. Mostly this part "Your word is like a sharp knife that pierced
my heart.
Blood start to drip like rain and then
quickly pour out like a waterfall."
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